Sunday, June 21, 2009

! Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Home alone and by oneself,
fed up, a sad unhappy me.
Life offers so little pleasure;
how dull and boring life can be.
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Bob Blackwell
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C. P. Sharma 09 March 2010

Sir, Lonely moments open up window to the self. I wonder why people are afraid of themselves that it torments them. Perhaps the ugly reflection of their make belief doesn't allow then to see their ever blissful self! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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Sameera Sameer 17 August 2009

ow! ! ! NO Bob you are strong enough! ! just as my friend David Harris said times being alone can be joyful with your thoughts

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David Harris 06 August 2009

Bob, sometimes those times being alone can be joyful with your thoughts and as you said other times not. Great poem my friend Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. David

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 06 August 2009

Home sweet home. I love the solitude filled with memories, peace and poetry.10.

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Ritty Patnaik 21 July 2009

it is a great idea to enjoy loneliness, by turning it into a fruitful adventure like taking up a hobby, of reading, writing, music or even gardening.it keeps ones mind off other things.very good write.

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i thoroughly enjoyed this Bob, . this just shows that wherever we may be and whatever situation we're in, life can be sometimes happy or sad..great one Bob.. :)

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 July 2009

You have bledded and homoganized positiveness and lonliness in this short and compact poem and the resultant is a capsule of joy and wisdomful pleasure of life. Simple yet meaningful poem, Bob...........10. Regards Naseer

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Mamta Agarwal 04 July 2009

you have portrayed the duality of life so graphically Bob when alone either we are lonely or enjoy the quiet and solitude. Mamta

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Home alone and by oneself, fed up, a sad unhappy me. Life offers so little pleasure; how dull and boring life can be...... life offers so little.. but home alone offers somany things beautiful write...10 read mine you go alone.....donot kill me.... dreamland and a place called home

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Alf Hutchison 28 June 2009

With age comes wisdom...how often do we all take the negative instead of the positive... very insightful write Bob as only the wise can... best regards Alf

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Sameer Ahmed 26 June 2009

Solitude described in two different ways and that are figured out on the extent our brain can conceive it. Loneliness wispers and we accomplish anything commanding in case we consider solitude our best companion. Yet, it can be other way round with unhappiness prevailing when we fail to adapt in the feeling of being alone. A very good bifid poem with a compact meaning in few lines Sir Bob......10

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~ Jon London ~ 23 June 2009

This is a spectacular piece Bob....we've all felt this way through our lives I believe.....Brilliant penning of the heart....I wish you every happiness my friend 10++

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 23 June 2009

In this powerful contrast composition, the poet reveals how 'aloneness' is handled by a content man and also by someone who is not that wise. So well written that it can quoted for the role of attitude in life! ! a definite >>10.

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 June 2009

hello, i m home alone too, unhappy and feeling really depressed when i came to your page, and i read your new nature poems and felt great...thanks sir, this one is good too.. you ve expressed yourselves well! ! ! ! .. well rite now i m feeling like this too, cause only my brother is with me, mom is away, and it is 12..30 midnite, i didnt feel like sleeping too, thanks anyway, but sort of feel when i come to PH tho, that i m not alone! ! ! .... 10 regards shan

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 June 2009

thoughtfull...........fine indeed! 10+++

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Fay Slimm 22 June 2009

Very clever write Bob - - and knowing you the second stanza will be true! ! Great hidden lesson though for us all - - luv Fay..10/10

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Anjali Sinha 21 June 2009

hey nice one dear-- my prayer to God to give you only the bliss from the second stanza -10 anjali

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Home alone happy by myself, joyful, contented with just me, Life offering so much pleasure; how still and peaceful life can be.....ot o beal along since journey is to be carried by self only/..... phylosophical write...10 read mine 'all alone'

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Vidi Writes 21 June 2009

However we talk so much about this life, Its amazing turning points Great treasure hunt it offers and coffers...still... There are moments, one feels alone Absolutely alone, like a cat lost in the forest. In spite of the vivid life of the wood, it feels alone But for a short span, when life within talks to the outer. Wonderfully crafted, in these few lines You have packed the cover story for the day. Good read indeed. Thank you.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 21 June 2009

Very Clever Bob - you rocked me for a moment - I know you are happily sitting in the second stanza

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