Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see you sitting there
Staying close to yourself
Not wanting anyone to come around you
When they do, you stare them down
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Ashleigh Stephenson
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Duncan Wyllie 20 April 2006

You have expressed yourself well again Ashleigh, thankyou for sharing your art, love Duncan

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Allan James Saywell 19 April 2006

If a fish could talk, a fish that lived in a fish-bowl he would say, stop staring at me it makes me angry.for i need to be left alone so i can enjoy my beauty Allan James Saywell

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Geoffery Tarquin 12 April 2006

You put that feeling right in to me, it's amazing. It's exactly how i feel sometimes, and i keep it bottled too. This is an amzing poem, excellent.

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