Friday, October 24, 2008

! Alone Comments

Rating: 3.0

I wake up every morning
To the sound of my alarm,
Walk out into the kitchen
Where the coffee's getting warm,
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Linda Ori
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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 October 2008

Good poem. Whatever be our routine, so hackneyed, we need someone to talk to, someone to come into our life......good musings on mechanical life patterns.

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David Threadgold 24 October 2008

A great poem. everyday life in verse. and projecting a picture as well. thanks for the read.10/10 Regards Dave T

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 October 2008

Midnight Rapster...You Go Girl! ! ! ...A lyrical, melodious delight, that poureth from your pen of gold, muir, and commonsense! LOL! Excellent piece of work, Linda... This flows fast & smooooooth, as white water rafting, before the rocks & cliff-drop.....You keep on talkin'-2- yirself, Midnight, so long as the outcome iz output like this! Frankie J./FjR (((((((2008)))))))

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Catty Bails 24 October 2008

wow! it feels so realistic well done keep writing :) i love all of your poems .xx. cat.xx.

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