Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Alone Comments

Rating: 3.8

Everything’s silent, not a sound to be heard,
Alone in the house, but I don’t feel scared.
Hiding with the shadows in the corner of the room,
Which have grown and disfigured through the shine of the moon.
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lindsey ashton
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serenity 0479 01 April 2009

it a has a great message in it and possesses a brilliant idea of loneliness. you've got great potential.

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Elle B 24 October 2008

'Hiding with the shadows in the corner of the room, Which have grown and disfigured through the shine of the moon.' Now, that's a beautiful poem. You surely have the talent

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 22 October 2008

'But I feel so good, I’m happy at last, A smile on my face, I’ve broken the mask' Profound....beautiful 10 read my poem 'mask'

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Billy Joe Collins 22 October 2008

this poem hits close to home thank you

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lindsey ashton

lindsey ashton

wigan, manchester UK
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