Thursday, October 9, 2008

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Loneliness has many forms,
My loneliness is,
like a flickering candle,
in an empty home.
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Jay P Narain
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Pandian Angelina 04 June 2009

I do not look into candle flames I do not look into my reflected eyes I do not dip my feet in sea waves I do not look up into the starry night sky I do not do a lot of things, all of which Remind me how lone I am and bring Tear drops to my eyes - Your Poem, makes me cry! How can you? How? I wonder! I felt the hot wax Roll down from your heart - It Pains me, the loneliness of the heart Familiar only to another lonely heart! A wonderful poem which sprung from The depth of your soul!

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premji premji 18 May 2009

alone in thoughts.....poetry gushes inside.......

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Salu Salu 01 January 2009

flickering candle in an empty home..... the weird feeling is transmitted when you ignited it, the solitude is still be felt in midst of chaos n commotion as it's a state of mind.... hopes lead us as to say...; my candle is full of fear and insecure as the winds of life may finally blow it off for good'... the passion is well conveyed. thanks for sharing......rgrds/salu

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