Monday, March 6, 2006

Alone Comments

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All alone I cry
I close my eyes
I do all I can but I wish to die
I take a breath then sigh
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adam cliff
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Melvina Germain 12 August 2006

Oh my sweet Adam, your feelings are coming forth. What a lovely way to express yourself with the gift of poetry. Lonliness is very difficult to deal with for certain, but it can be so rewarding if you listen to the whispers. Dieing will come soon enough, you don't worry about that, leave that in the hands of the Lord. You have so much to live for and so much to give. You have been given this awesome gift of poetry to share with the world. Please don't take that away from us. -----Melvina

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Arielle Perkins 08 March 2006

Dont we all wish to die sometimes. Especially when our parents dont et us do every little thing that pos into our heads.

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