Alone Comments

You are a real inspiration, clear and deep, awesome!

seems sad yet we all are dragged into the forever....could be, that last line a title for a novel? thank you for sharing.... BG

Tis a sad poem but I really liked how the crimson tide smiles on you. Great imagery and writing as usual. Karin Anderson

Great pathos and melancholy in this poem Viola, heartfelt indeed. Hope it isn't true though! Mark

this has great images for your reader... and I love your ending. this is writen very well. good job. Becca

A hearfelt poem. I love it. Ron

I think I'm on that rocky road right now. it flows so well. thx Heath

poignant metaphors with much insight best wishes Shimon

Life consists of many a rocky road, as you have so nicely put. an excellent write. Tango.

touching poem, thanks for sharing

Hey super V this is excellent a 10 in mine and everyones book.

sorrowfully the imagery of the tragedy we sometimes face in this 'world' of ours. Hopefully this was a passing thing and that healing has replaced the sadness. You have a talent dear lady. Well done. Ten Again!

i really do love this poem maybe you would like some of mine

Lovely simply lovely 10/10

wow i loved it very nice :)

yet it never rocks up the blue of oceanic sky trudging the walks even when alone smile still comes in its own waqy time when oscillates by the swing..................wonderful poem by the imagery, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

Forever is a big place attach a safety line 10 Paris