Alone Comments

Are you lonely every night it's what I've tried to fight? Do you really think about me with the sweet memories we shared? ....lovely and intense feeling beautifully expressed.. i love it and appriciate too... read mine you go alone, miss I miss you, mary to marrytragic end, o mother.. comment too

nice song...err write..ala Lonesome Tonight by Elvis Presley...good passionate verses and lovely to read...10

you are a prolific writer nice poem...easy and melancholy..so very near the truth sat

I should have given you ten points but altough your poem is wonderful to me, something I cannot explain stands in the way; , ! chris.STILL A KISS.

Hi joan...you've got good expression of feelings here in this piece of poetry and you did express a lot there. Your interaction with nature in these lines are also reflective. Good piece of work here Joan. I like this poetry

Are you lonesome tonight Do you miss me tonight Are you sorry we drifted apart Does your memory stray To a brighter summer day When I kissed you And called you sweetheart Do the chairs in your parlour seem empty and bare Do you gaze at your doorstep and picture me there Is your heart filled with pain Shall I come back again Tell me dear are You lonesome tomight Al Jolson 1930 Elvis Presley 1960

Dear Joan This is a wonderful poem. Touches anybody who has had the feeling of loneliness. Loneliness comes in waves.. aching the ventricles... making dysrhythmia... there you hear my heart mourns. trekking over Himalayas... kissing wild flowers... dipping in freezing streams... I miss you so much... Yet the heart aches in pain. Loneliness.... The enemy of concentration Hurdles for happy thoughts Hope my dreams'll heal my heart in this Autumn before chilling winter comes

OMG! That was Beautiful, Joan you are very talented, keep up the great work. This was Awesome! ! ! ! I hope you will read my poems also.

Since you asked for my evaluation, I will give it to you. And since I am older than you - I'm 82, I can say what I dam please. I am very tired of Luv Pomes, especially on poetry web sites. Everyone who writes them is between 10 and 30 and either in or out of ''love''. You can pay more attention to your meter, and some of it is almost good enough for greeting cards.

Lonliness sometime kindles such unwanted thoughts in one's mind.

I like this, the premise is interesting.

It grabs you and holds you. I like it very much.

filled with depth and meaning, i gave u a 10 for this

heart when lies in askance the blue may satiate the thirst of night love still croons in the room of desire as lone silence was the guest of last night........................yet love provoking, and luscious green, wellpennede, thanks for sharing

Sweet utterances from a tender heart. I will always hunt for your this type poem.

awwww... I can relate - you are not alone my angel X