Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the crowd, I stand alone
Noticeable but unnoticed,
Loveable but unloved,
Caring but uncared.
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shruti modi
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Harsh Thakar 22 February 2010

____________________________________________________________________ Very well Described, I can connect my self with it as I feel the same. Between the people but still all alone….So Alone! ! ! ____________________________________________________Harsh___________

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C. P. Sharma 30 April 2009

Eloquent loneliness. Arnold says, 'We mortal millions live alone.' As for love, trust begets trust, distrust leads nowhere. When there is trust, there is no questioning. CP

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Sameer Ahmed 30 January 2009

A fine description of your solitude. The urge to get rid of this has been put in compact but meaningful words.........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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premji premji 03 November 2008

none can be a poet unless hurt by love...

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 15 September 2008

A very calm yet intense poem. thanks

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Mark Jos'e 04 September 2008

You're no longer alone, im here 4 u im your friend the 1 u were looking 4 your lover

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Reetessh Sabrr 04 September 2008

only the poet can derive the plesaure from pain the feelings woven give a self solace that nothing else can give but shruti...m sure u don't get stuck in this best wishes!

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Kelly Houseman 13 August 2008

very heartfelt, i can relate, very well expressed and nice to read thankyou. kel

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I really enjoyed reading this poem. And I know how you must feel.. I've been through something like this. Great Poem. ~Trysta

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Luca Tony 05 August 2008

I`m Luca Tony from Italy and i read some of your poems and it seams very nice i just want to have alittle shat that`s all and specially allone what about you! ! ?

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Blue Eyes 05 August 2008

oh my god.this is really poetry in its most delightful form, i love it.

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David Paigneau 30 July 2008

Very simple and straight words to express in a powerful way this universal feeling. Very encouraging, keep on good work!

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Gerhard Knight 30 July 2008

I know exactly how you feel - excellently written

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Daniel Allen 28 July 2008

I enjoy this poem, it shows what happens as you grow older. While in high school clicks begin to form, and you lose friends that you thought would always be with you.

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Linda Weischedel 15 July 2008

Again, another outstanding poem Shruti. Another 10 for you! Great job, Linda

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Serenity Prayer 09 July 2008

its so sad. i loved reading it but it just broke my heart. great job though. im sorry you feel this way.

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