Thursday, April 10, 2008

Alone Comments

Rating: 4.5

There is a place I go deep within my soul;
where no one else can find me
Whenever I need to be.
It is there I stay but for a little while;
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Rose Smith
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Greenwolfe 1962 27 August 2008

Poems should be short. They should also say something that everyone uinderstands instinctively. This does both. Well done. GW62

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Bill Smith 11 April 2008

ouch! touched a nerve or two regards Smiffy

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Glaedr the poet 11 April 2008

Short, yet conveys a meaning that could be expressed in novel. Well done!

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Michael Campbell 11 April 2008

we all have that spot. very personal and well put. regret is difficult. thank you.

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