How could I ever understand
what it is you choose
to call existence
and how could I ever
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wonderful poem...even as a dot we never get lost..10
a stranger is a friend you've yet to meet and what i find is stanger still the vast unknow inside of me that wanders out into crowded streets lol sorry what i mean is its a very good poem and i just wanted to address how so many people are more alone in a crowded room then they are by themselves
I do not feel that kind of alienation from others but reading this poem I can feel what it is like and I believe you - which is why it is a successful poem.
There is something warm I find in 'alone.' How to explain it. I enjoyed this very much - one I read several times over - just because. Thanks for that!
Powerful and thought provoking, with so many layers to savour. I especially loved the last 3 lines - I swear they made they gave me goosebumps! Hugs Anna xxx
Thought provoking.... makes me want to cry out from the page! Roger.
Camus was more terse, but more wordy than your poem - but perhaps he provided context for your verse. A thoughtful, and thought-provoking penning. - Will
Great souls are often the most lonely souls of all.Eloquent write, Robert. Warmest regards, Sandra
Alone is our most intimate comanion. When we die they will bury alone with us like we were lovers. (smiles.) Nice moody feel to this pen