Alone Comments

I feel you, a piece of all I want you, body, spirit and soul Give me a sign and say you’re my other I promise I will, and there will be no other Excellent. I can see your talent developing. To be a writer all we have to do is write. I agree, there is talent here.

I agree with Nimal-this really is an interesting poem of longing. You have real talent!

A night vision of a domestic cat, great line................

'...and I'm enthralled' with your poem! Nicely done and senstive, emotional, strong and determined. I like it! LSP