Sunday, January 13, 2008

Alone... Comments

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They cry but no one cares,
They hug but no one’s there.
They laugh but no one hears,
And the others laugh at their fears.
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Lexi Smith
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Shahjada Islam 13 January 2009

Too true.Nice rhyming pattern, by the way. Your poems make me think.

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Kee Thampi 06 June 2008

the real from a real poet But you don’t help or even smile, After all, what do you stand to gain?

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