Alone Comments

Nice work with the muse of loneliness; but, with hope.

Being 'alone' all contained in one poem, with a fantastic redeeming end line! I find the poem connects to readers as the similar emotions you related here all touch us in a way, and the style simply effective because of such relevance. Crafty verse presentation and perfect rhyme, (wish I could write like this) and of course, the menaing of the poem is true.10++++++++

This is a gem of a poem Bob - put together with all the pathos of the subject - - alone is a scary place to feel we are at....... strong, wistfully sad verse. 10 and more from Fay

ot of all the alone poems this one is the best. no lie. thank you so much for reading my poem bipolar adn sorry it's taken so to get back to you

alone is the mystery word here but it comes only sometimes you can't live alone all through your life you need someone by your side..grace

It's said that Shakespeare with his magic pen took two l's and wrapped them round so lonely though one, makes another sound.

Yes, we are alone within all. An enjoyable poem. My 10.

i enjoyed reading this poem.........felt like i could relate right through. thank you for sharing this.

It's sad that we can feel alone when we're in a room with alot of people and yet we don't care what each other are going through because we all have our own problems and don't want other people problems, but we don't realize our problems are the reason everyone else has problems cause we do things that effect each other whether for the good or the bad we're all in this together and we need to realize that before we won't feel so alone in the world, but then again it would makes us feel even more alone, but it's all good.

'Alone with people all around' surrounded yet secluded.. what a picture you have painted here.. From the first line to the last Well Done! .

Its terrible to be alone But its equally terrible to be in love Both have their edges Pointed on the heart and mind. Which one is better, if anyone asks - I find both are same. One gives full freedom in expectations Another puts in apathy of considerations. Universal concept, beautifully worded. Thank you.