Alone Comments

God this is good...i hope u won't delet this one..i can totally relate to it. Fantastic, passionate write.10 SG

‘…to many skeletons in the closet to tell..../so much unfinished.’ UNFINISHED …finished in mortal life …to be ‘Finished’ in heavenly Life…Who [God] is ‘Perfect Finish’ … Make us perfect finish [lower case] … Very much moving and touching poem… thanks for a paradigm change poem 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

wow dat wuz deep...but even thru all da pain// dont give up on life! -DLG

I love this, it's just incredible. It so deserves more than a pathetic number 10.

very descriptive poem its good

too true and too often nice nice i like it

Most if not all have fears.... fears hunts us in all corners and in all times. Fears sometimes push people to become suicidal, make people withdraws from society, keep some in their own world feeling lonesome just what you feel now Max.. On the bright side this poem shows that man is normal... it is but normal to have fears, what is important is overcoming it to come out a winner. Most poets have fears and loners... but through their pens they are able to shared to the world the things which many have taken for granted. We are able to open minds and feeling giving inspiration and hope to other, so cheer up Ma! Thanks for sharing. Keep it up.

harley i never knew you were such a sensitive guy now i know y your my best mate if u need help just tell me and i'll try to help and u know i can keep secrets