My life plays out before me
It twists and turns
The mystery that it brings is terrifying
I've tried to leave it all behind
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At your age a lot of us felt lonely too. I don't know if its of any comfort, but we make our own equations with life and it does the same with us. Live each day to the fullest and best of luck. I liked this poem, by the way..
Your poem shows us the pain of loneliness. Well-done!
nice poem..by the way all are alone..we came alone and will leave alone...will have to wage the war against the vagaries of life....