Monday, January 10, 2011

Alone Comments

Rating: 4.5

As dark breaks the dawn,
The knife breaks my skin,
I feel alone,
In this cold world.
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Sam S.Slait
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Shihabudheen K J 15 November 2012

Deep from your heart.well

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Alex Lees 02 February 2012

I know how you feel!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 15 June 2011

THE POEM HAS CLEAR IMAGERY BUT THE IDEA OF HURTING ONESELF BECAUSE OF A BROKEN HEART IS NEVER A GOOD ONE WRITE POEM INSTEAD THAN BE SAD WHEN YOU ARE ALONE

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Natasha Kirke 06 February 2011

Gosh! This one is really, really heart breaking! Though pretty well written. I think you need someone to talk to, not necessarily a psycologist but someone who can understand what you're going through. I really hope these feelings go away.

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Oh! ! ! This is an emo one

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