So deep the silence
I am drowned beneath
So deafening it makes
The sound of tear dropp could be heard
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i know xactly what you mean, we all experiance at some point in our lives.Simple yet pierces through the heart. nice read
awww, yes I know the feeling of loneliness is unbearable, you really painted a real picture there, good job! Love the pen name by the way :)
Well you're not alone here, can certainly hear 'many' of those 'drops'. This one's a keeper pour moi.........thanks for sharing little star your star of a poem.......marci.xo
Fabulous poem it's so short it is so heart rendering. I love the line 'The sound of a tear dropp could be heard' I could almost visulize and hear it. Kept thinking about it after I read it.