Monday, April 25, 2011

Alone (2) Comments

Rating: 4.2

alone wherever I go
alone whatever I do
alone all the time
alone what I should do
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Kennedy Huston 04 January 2016

I can really feel the emotion in this poem and the truth to it if that makes sense, great poem, i feel like that a lot so it is easy to relate. Try to remember the people you're close and that they care, so you don't feel so alone. That sounds really stupid and it doesn't really work all the time but: p it never hurts to try. Unless you like being alone then you know keep on doing what ever you're doing: p

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Joseph Sanchez 28 April 2014

EHH I WOULD RATHER NOT BRahahaha

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Dove M 10 February 2014

Read the poem i posted called in the end it may help.

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Milica Franchi De Luri 18 August 2013

I know how you feel. I am the same, and although it is very painful to be alone in life, there is always a hope that someday our situation will change. I love your poem

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Mia Zeglinski 21 July 2013

Yhea, Being Alone Is Hard: / I feel like that.... Sometimes I actually bring the knife to my throat, or the rope to my neck.... I never CAN do it.... I do WANT to DO IT I don't know why people make other people feel so SMALL in life.... I'm all alone... I have nobody to go to... Stay Strong! Don't end Up like Me Or Amanda Todd! -Mia

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Brittany Benson 07 June 2013

well i like it but you cant have I all the time it deosent rime besids that i enjoyed it :)

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im Sorry So Sorry 11 January 2013

THIS IS BRUTALLY AWFUL

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Lidia Schaffer 07 November 2012

this poem hurts me but goes into the depth of pain that the writer is feelin, Keep your head up! ! Never solve a situation with suicide! ! Lidia

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Destiny Waller 30 October 2012

i am so sorry im alone to i feel the same way

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William Kd 10 October 2012

Better to feel lonliness than to not feel at all in death. Poetry shows beauty even in misery.

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Allie Whitehead 01 October 2012

Wow. This is a really good poem. It almost made me cry ive been through something like this

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Eindaray Kyaw 21 August 2012

You have a chance to feel alone, fri.....But you shouldn't try to suicide alone as in your poem! After learning from being alone, Just go on trying to find out how to beat being alone! This is just my opinion, might be right or not! Thanks! ! !

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Yvonne Selase 03 August 2012

it made my cry....my boyfriend ended things with me today., ....we love each other but his family hates my guts and he says he, ld rather set me free so i dont cry any more but right now i just want to die....i even thought of suicide but i cant do that to my mum....im just so alone

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Kabelo Mogosoane 24 February 2012

Alone is a place where you are you but a place no one wants to be. Love the poem

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Najibullah Amiri 12 August 2011

nice very nice when i have read i became fresh

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Jenna Bergman 06 July 2011

i know how you feel! ! ! ! !

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Holly Phan 05 May 2011

(ToT) I'm here for you.

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Kee Thampi 26 April 2011

alone I cant sleep at night alone I am shaking from the fright alone all the time alone I`m gonna end this loneliness tonighte of very emotional writes

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