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this is really moving and very well written. i look forward to reading more of your work.

Beautiful! I feel your desperation and confusion

Just~~~~~~~~~beautiful! ! ! marci. :)

Very heartfelt and sincere poem here. The line 'lost in my own song' is provocative-though we want to share our song with others, it does not always turn out that way, and if so, rarely does it last a life time. In the meantime, it's nice to have poetry through which we can share our own song. Good work.

I understand what you mean by this. Men are such rats especially where the heart is fragile.