Tuesday, January 2, 2007

Alone Comments

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I will not sleep,
I will rest.
Not until I know your home,
Because you are my everything
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Nicole Arishenkoff
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Adeline Foster 09 August 2008

Sweet little poem, some points to appreciate in this: I like that it is brief and the rhymes are not forced. Some answers can be found in my poem called The Bloom of Youth. Please read. Adeline

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Subbaraman N V 29 December 2007

God bless you to overcome loneliness!

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Aashish Ameya 02 January 2007

though thought is good, but it's too direct....

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Nicole Arishenkoff

Nicole Arishenkoff

Nelson B.C
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