Wednesday, October 7, 2020

Alone Comments

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We are born alone
And we die alone
And between the two
We live as ghosts
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Kevin Patrick
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2020

Between birth and death we live as ghosts. Every soul takes birth with body alone and faces death of body alone. Shelter and love make life beautiful. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned..5 stars..

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Terry Craddock 08 October 2020

'We are born alone And we die alone And between the two We live as ghosts' this stanza sets up beautifully the lines 'Begging for love At a banquet full of crumbs' it is true we are born alone unless twins, triplets etc who share from the womb, even in death alone we can die in memories of choice in good company loved your poem

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Richard Wlodarski 07 October 2020

Very well written poem, Kevin. But I beg to differ. My near death experience has taught me that we are not alone at the time of our death.

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Kevin Patrick 04 November 2020

Hi Richard! , I normally don't reply to comments, but I was taken by yours! , that's amazing! , Im sorry that you had to go through it and hope your well! . I yearn to believe there is something more then the material fabric of existence. I am privileged to hear from you. Kevin

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 October 2020

Hauntingly beautiful. Truth hurts. But i aint giving up on love. Its the only nonsense which makes sense

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