I feel alone
I don't mean I feel lonely
I mean I feel alone
Like a blanket
Resting on a body
Or the feathers of a pillow
Under a head
Or the tight string of sleep-pants
Twisted around a waist
It is a cold sort of feeling
Like mist covering a field
I feel alone
As if it was an actual thing
Alone but not lonely? That can be good, if you enjoy your own company! I like your first poem. Welcome to Poem Hunter!
Thank you Kim for your comment and your welcome. I hope to see you again here.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation nicely encapsulated with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Adams.
The feeling of loneliness. Can feel like a heavy emotion to know. Amazing poetry.
Thank you John, or is it Castellenas? Either way I do thank you and appreciate your comment. I'm in agreement with this heavy emotion too.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A good start with a nice poem, Rachealgrace. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.