Saturday, June 30, 2018

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the moon hides behind the clouds
When the seagulls hide their faces underneath their wings.
When the ocean waves are tired and resting
And the only sound are the whispering of palm leaves
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carlos trevino
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Chinedu Dike 30 June 2018

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing Carlos.

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Naila Rais 30 June 2018

Such a soul igniting poem.... Keep it up.... You may like to read my poems and express your views too.. Naila

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Carino Trevino 30 June 2018

I will do this and thank you for your comments

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Naila Rais 30 June 2018

To my favorite..... 👍👍

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Kelly Kurt 30 June 2018

A lovely poem, Carlos.

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Carino Trevino 30 June 2018

Thank you Kelley

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