Wednesday, September 7, 2016

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I cry, but no one hears my sorrow
I weep, but no one sees my tears
I am alone on a sea of loneliness
Lost, forgotten, adrift on the water.
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Mizzy ........ 07 September 2016

You certainly captured deep inner feelings in this poem, The loneliness and yearning are tangible. Strong piece of work!

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Grace Burke

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