Saturday, May 14, 2016

Alone Comments

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The pain is real
I will become stone
I will agree to your deal
I will leave you alone
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Blair Blakeslee
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Unwritten Soul 11 June 2016

Hope your pain will be healed, and then move to another way which is better days to have and to live. It just we need some forgiveness and live ourselves cheerfully because everyone deserve a great life. Pain will be gone, but till it vanish...we have to endure and it is just no word to describe...Get well soon!

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 May 2016

It has been said you need time You push me away with no remorse Don't ask for anything, not even a dime You have started us on this course.... unjust rejection and resulting loneliness makes our hearts like stone...... it is true..... you are writing about a living example in day to day life......... thank you for this thought provoking poem. tony

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