Friday, October 9, 2015

Alone Comments

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Surrounded by the crowd with a loud noise everywhere
Snuggled by lots of warm hugs and kisses,
Promising to be with me all the time
Yet I am alone.
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Rajnish Manga 09 October 2015

This is a lovely poem, yet, it is difficult to understand what, in spite of so many positives in life, has kept the protagonist distraught and down. Following lines add to the somber atmosphere: Yet I am alone with all my wounds. (God) give me the strength to survive this cruel world

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Sia Reis 09 October 2015

Thank You so much! ! I really appreciate your wonderful comment!

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