Sunday, October 4, 2015

Alone Comments

Rating: 4.7

A lamp post, dark, dismal, barren street,
waiting in anticipation for the dealers wheels.
Tattered clothes, stiletto heels on weary feet.
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Melvina Germain
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John Maxwell 11 June 2016

If it were a Cop. They would get her off the street. Sad but true.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 March 2016

I was deeply touched by your poem. A sad, poignant depiction of reality that pervades our society.10/10.

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Mj Lemon 05 October 2015

Just brilliant....You have captured a moment that happens all too often in Canadian cities. Stunning imagery.

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Kelly Kurt 04 October 2015

A stark, poignant piece! Well written and a sad truth in our culture

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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