Alone Comments

Nice imagery and rhyme throughout. I enjoyed this poignant expression of your feelings.

Adventurous life! Staking everywhere, difficulty with every step! This mountain, that ocean, This valley, that urban city All are full of thorns! Everywhere is crowded But all alone in crowdedness Need the power of struggle against the difficulty Need the confidence to the crown of life

Hath no fear to loose, no one to recall Hath no pains to choose, no deserving to fall ...... I am idol of solidity When i have kissed the forehead of difficulity ......excellent poem penned... Difficulty in loneliness is nothing if there has struggle power, confidence, fearless activeness inside....congrats for being selected this poem as POD...deserves rating 5++

Nice poem. I liked it.

Ask the whispering waves of breeze Am i alone in cold days of freeze They say I am idol of solidity When i have kissed the forehead of difficulity idol of solidity forhead of difficulty great expressions my dear poet. tony

Fantastic poem, nicely written. I enjoyed reading it 5 Stars

Very nice imagery and creative rhyme. I enjoyed this poem very much and encourage you to write more for us.

Sweet poem, nicely rhymed and holding in it a sublime message.

Sometimes being alone gives time to work on yourself and your fears. Nicely expressed.

2) crystal clearly composed wonderful metaphor poems dear poet, my answer is often a little too long, but that is the best token, thank you very much for sharing this very touching poem, very engaging Congrtulations being The Member Poem Of the Day. A true honour to obtain 5 stars.

A most enlightened poem and very emotive most beautifully worded with melancholy and mirrored sadness about death Is it our duty to ask about death, dear poet? Be closest to the Lord and we can still enjoy nature, whatever it is we are grateful having the ability making poems from our deep dark minds and this excellent poem comes out illuminated

A deeply poignant write. A vivid depiction of loneliness. Congratulations for having this poem chosen as POD.

A nice and confident stroke... well crafted... Congrats for the poem being selected as the POD! With best wishes

Masha Allah May Allah bless uh my brother.... Beautiful poem

Masha Allah.. May Allah bless uh my brother... Beautiful peom

very beautifully the fall of words, I really like this poem.

Aabid, beautiful poem from you again..you have mastery hand to craft thoughts in artistic form...As if the empty land sound so packed with colours, because the words you said make things more bigger than we can see sometimes, like this poem. To be alone however its not weakening, it strengthen if we know..if we know...

I had to come back for a second read and to put this stunning poem in my favorites...thank you so much Aabid...100+

You capture the sense of loneliness in such a heartfelt manner Aabid. a poem to sit with and reflect upon.

No fear to loose, no one to recall, no pain to choose That's a blessing!