Monday, July 27, 2015

Alone Comments

Rating: 3.0

Someday you'll regret leaving me so soon
When you get too lonely under the moon

You've given me time to roam
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Selena Luna
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Abubakar Abdulkadir 29 July 2015

So lovely. Spiced with rhymes. brimfilled with emotions and fine usage of words.

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Athanasius Okowa 27 July 2015

just the emotion is enough to draw blood.. good job with the rhyme... alone+tone

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Allotey Abossey 27 July 2015

Wow.. Poetry is truly a beautiful way to express one's thought and feelings. You did it beautifully but it pays to also known that certain things happen to make us better people for the future. We may not have to be with everyone that come our way. Stay blessed my friend

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