Someday you'll regret leaving me so soon
When you get too lonely under the moon
You've given me time to roam
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just the emotion is enough to draw blood.. good job with the rhyme... alone+tone
Wow.. Poetry is truly a beautiful way to express one's thought and feelings. You did it beautifully but it pays to also known that certain things happen to make us better people for the future. We may not have to be with everyone that come our way. Stay blessed my friend
So lovely. Spiced with rhymes. brimfilled with emotions and fine usage of words.