Monday, January 12, 2015

Alone! Comments

Rating: 4.5

All alone in a lovely spot
Withdrawn to a senseless valley
A frozen dream augments inside
Shivering thoughts marches outside
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SALINI NAIR
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2015

To a lovely shore. A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Let love rule the world. E.K.L.

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Kee Thampi 16 January 2015

Love preaches its eternal warmth Unites the self to a crazy loop Adore with blindness and mourn in thirst Ever form of love in shado........ lovely write

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 January 2015

Love the immortal part of life To be in eternal love and peace! - -Indeed love is immortal. Very nicely penned. Many thanks.

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Valsa George 13 January 2015

'Love leads all to a lovely shore'! When mind gets filled with love, all despairing and menacing thoughts go outside! It is to such a state of mind, man must strive to reach! A beautiful poem Salini!

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Akhtar Jawad 13 January 2015

This voyage is among glowing clouds Drive that tempts to be eternal Float to merges in that stampede Not to the mortal part of self A beautiful poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 January 2015

Very nicely crafted with wonderful lines......and rightly said love is immortal and transcends everything......amazing write

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 January 2015

Beautiful poem Salini. Fantastic lines I loved the most... Love holds all to a lovely shore Love create all mourn on shore Love the immortal part of life..............................love our soul To be in eternal love and peace!

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Rajesh Thankappan 12 January 2015

Love may have an immortal role in our existence but can it transcend death? I do hope so. Enjoyed each and every line of the poem.

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