Monday, March 10, 2014

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't want to die alone.
I once loved a girl I thought I knew.
Her eyes caught mine, and brought my mind to peace.
When her lips meant mine, my breath gave way.
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Gary Hembree
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Noreen Carden 10 March 2014

Hey Gary this is a really beautiful.When she whispered in my ear, my walls would break that line says it all. Beautifully written Gary well done I give it a ten

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