Saturday, February 8, 2014

Alone Comments

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Alone
Day by day I walk across the class room
Every time I pass across the class
The only glance I get is a stranger’s glance
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Akhtar Jawad 28 May 2014

During my teen age, when I was a college student, I fell in love with a class mate, now I laugh at that laugh and the girl never knew that I loved her, I have described that love in my poem, An Innocent Love Affair. Your poem is nice and impressive but do not take it so much seriously. I think it was not love just an attraction and I hope you will forget it and may be laughing in future like me.

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Susan Lacovara 15 March 2014

You honesty is hearbreakingly felt...but do not feel you are alone. We have all had these same emotions, one time or another. Believe each day holds promise undeserving for the beauty of new friendships. I welcome you as my friend. PEACE

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Hira Akhtar 09 February 2014

ooo dear piumi don't feel alone, in this world nothing is permanent some one is coming and at the same tome someone is leaving so don't you lose heart... Poem is written nicely :) liked it hira

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Gajanan Mishra 08 February 2014

feeling of loneliness, I like it, thanks.

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