Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Alone Comments

Rating: 4.5

I walk along a melancholy strand,
Hearing music played too far
To be meant for me.
Drifting down the beach,
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Charles Darnell
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Bursting with a beauty that is very creative!

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Charles Darnell 06 January 2016

Thank you!

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Noreen Carden 26 November 2013

Beautifully written a story of love and loss and nice description of the seashore i love the line Your image is torn by breeze and spray

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Wahab Abdul 07 July 2013

the last 3 lines is wonderful!

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Aaron Evans 04 July 2013

beautiful poem. well written.

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Bri Edwards 03 July 2013

i love it. it is refreshing to read a smooth, understandable, grammatically well-constructed, and beautiful poem on PH. thanks for sharing. i give you very high marks.

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Charles Darnell

Charles Darnell

St Martinsville, Louisiana
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