Aloha Annie (Part 3) Comments

Yea, faster, faster hoss, faster. Was tempted to skip the comment Dee. Anyway must rush - fine write by the way! ! xx jim

Have you every thought of getting a job writing scripts? This one certainly reads like a television series. Great stuff. love Allie xxxx

Dee, I think it was imagination playing tricks on me, but this seemed to be shorter than the other two. Maybe the flow was faster. It was still a captivating read that I thoroughly enjoyed. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it. David

WHERE IS PART 4? ? ? ? ? ':

So, she finally gets to meet the guy who saved her life! I didn't realize she had never met him. I can't wait to see how this goes down. Still hooked!

You've left us wondering what was going through her mind as Sam walked out. Did he leave a phone number? Will she follow him? Will he be back tomorrow? Oh Dee, you're such a tease... Love, Fran xxx

Well Dee, it is so kind of Frank to offer up refreshments on your tab...I'll try one of those 'island hoppers' while I wait for intermission to end...so I can continue reading this fabulous mystery! ! ............................................Diane

Moderate drama has justn been kicked-up to the highly intese front flames... Your progression is very well sequenced....detail to the narration is capturing, young lady... //////////////I N T E R M I S S I O N////////////////// REFRESHMENTS ON THE AUTHOR'S TAB AFTER SHOW RECEPTION AT CO CO LO CO's [bring i.d. with proper birth name....'cept for Dawn] FjR