Aloha Annie (Part 2) Comments

I'm reminded here of Dylan's Jack of Hearts in Lily, Rosemary etc. But this gentleman in the offing seems a little more sinister perhaps. Another intriguing instalment Dee. Fine writing. jim

And in this one, you fill in more details of your Annie, while leaving space for the suspense to grow.... I'm enjoying this. love, Allie xxxxx

Dee a nice continuance to this mini series. Lovely way you keep everyone on the edge of the seat before calling (to be continued) . You have that wonderful knack of baiting the hook, catching us and leave us dangling until the next installment. Good one. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

Still hooked...onto part three! ! You caught me off guard with the 'flirting with ladies' part. Now I'm starting to wonder about her.

So here she is, flirting lightly with everyone (including ladies - is she bisexual then?) , enjoying the relaxed atmosphere. And not noticing the man at the end of the bar.........must go on to part 3 now. Enjoying your story, as usual, Dee. Love, Fran xxx

Yes, thats right, Miss DEE...Leave us all at the CO-CO, to go loco over where you left us hangin'! I DO DECLARE YOU QUILL WITH PITCHED-FORK THIS NIGHT! Looking mighteee Fine, lass...indeed..... Can't stop now...goin' on to part 3! FjR