Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Alms Comments

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Yes
Today
I will
Give her alms
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Sanjay Mehta
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Asif Andalib 17 October 2012

A conscience that is whipping your soul. A beautiful write.

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You are speaking the mind of all.... Some give alms out of moods, some give out of concern and some give on conditions... I feel like giving alms to a new beggar but when the same beggar extends the hands again and again I feel annoyed.. I can`t write a poem on my attitude.. Still we are all sailing in the same boat of giving alms not often.. Good sharing Sanjay

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 September 2012

what we give others should not be announced! I received a lots of alms from the readers! Thank you, SM, for the alms!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 13 September 2012

Indifference reciprocated cruelly.fine presentation.You get what you give.A good message.

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Ramesh Rai 12 September 2012

very fantastic. clever too. you will give ur hands as alms. great thought. May god bless you. way back i read one poem - one line, what i gave that i got. you also deserve so, . top marks.

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Neela Nath Das 11 September 2012

Very profound poem with satirical note.Marvelous!

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