Friday, October 9, 2009

Almost Whole Again Comments

Rating: 3.5

Writing,
depression setting in
but I can't stop.
Halfway through
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Heart of Ice Die Die Die
COMMENTS
Uche Chidozie 24 August 2012

Depression all around, i hope you as a writer overcome it through writing, all your works expressed that same theme............... good, but you will become a powerful poet will little imagery in your work. thanks

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Kieran J96 29 July 2010

i feel the same sometimes

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Eyan Desir 19 October 2009

Twisted painful well expressed

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Marilyn Lott 11 October 2009

You probably don't want me to say this but this poem us so very sad to me. Hurting yourself to cover up the pain is heartbreaking. I hear a lot of people do it. God bless you, my dear! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

Wow this was really a very intense poem

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Nalathai Vongjalorn 09 October 2009

Nice poem really like it

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