Almost There2 Comments

Hi David, I prefer this poem over the other. This is really nice. I guess I am a little romantic. Excellent poem nice and fun to read. Take care

Hi David. Your poem is peaceful and calming to me. It has a nice rhythm and rhyme :)

I agree with Mary, a pleasant read. Well done.

Sounds like a beautiful evening you've described wonderfully with such simple words. Great work (as usual) David. Sincerely, Mary

i like this poem david it makes me think and i dont do that very often because i'm always laughing at myself orgy asm