Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Almost Numb Comments

Rating: 2.3

Lift up the weight before you drop
You’re strong enough to hold an army in your arms
If your strong enough to let me see you cry
Then I’m sure you’re strong enough just to try
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Sara Tehrani
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daddy destroyer 20 May 2018

that was a three yr old could of done that

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Chey King 05 June 2009

Abosutely LOVE the first stanza.10++ for sure.

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Yassar Ali 03 June 2009

Short, simple n special. Keep up the good work

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Numb is the simplest thing to be I like your poem Great job! ! ! ! 10+++

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