Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Almost Honest Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was almost honest to her
No notions no deceptions of winter
She like a feather perched on my sunny side
I looked for reasons not to disguise
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KUNAL SETH
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Beth Johnson 02 July 2012

I loved the ending.This was beautifully written romantic.I truly enjoyed it.It was liked a lullaby.I liked almost honest and the truthfulness in this poem.Well painted :) beth I gave it 9 but nothing happened.

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