Almost Famous. Comments

Nicely done. I often wonder about those who are waiting in the wings, only one step away from stardom which for so many never comes. They are left waiting in the wings.

Yes Sir......definitely one day she is going to know that... 10

so short yet it is such a good poem! ! bravo! ! ! luv lisa xo : -)

short and simple great poem

I must agree with Eldon Thomas, most poets I know are free verse, which is an art in its self, but I prefer rhyme. I'm not sure if 'aldo' is a name or a misspelling of all though, but it is very nice. It's got a raw sort of feeling to it.

I'm digging your style dude! I don't meet that many fellow rhyming poets. The majority of poets I interact with are spoken word artists whose poems are mostly prose and I am left feeling out of place. But they are still good. I like your style. Keep it up.

So bright but not yet a star. Inner brightness is what a star wishes it could have and you got it.

You write with gusto, you are already a poet ro recon with, live life with pride and cast off pessimism in life. My good wishes are with you. CP

My hopes are with you. Keep on honing your writing skills and become a famous poet soon.

A wonderful poem....................

Hopefull and lovely poem which shows your innocent thoughts...

everyone is a star even if we don't know it yet, good job i like it. =]

I know what your name is.. this is deep with much thought. the sun will shine soon.

The most important thing we have is our identity.One day Jose you WILL achieve fame if you need it bad enough.Great theme well thought out. Sid.

Very touching. May your dream one day be realized. Warm regards, Sandra

love it, seems you are well on your way to becoming famous. wonderful poem

your name already shines more brightly than the many colored tiles glowing in the high plateau buildings of the Univ of Mexico

very nice poem.god will fulfil ur wishes.

that so awesome i wish mine were that good

its pretty gangster or awesome sounding it sounds like a rap. its very gangster