Sunday, October 18, 2009
Almost Dead Comments
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It hurts and you dont see it,
this girl is far beyond those quick fixes.
sitting and staring at the wall,
if she stands up to her knees she will fall.
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januel l
18 October 2009
this is amazing...just a quick tip, but try not to worry about the ryhmes so much, its beautiful, but try just letting everything go
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7/21/2025 2:55:04 AM # 1.0.0
i aggre with januel rhyming does not make a poem... well i guess it can but ur heart makes the poem... just let it flow like a stream or a creek