Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Almost Cancer Comments

Rating: 3.5

Today I met a man who thought that he was truly dying
This brush with his mortality had left him lost and crying
He never really understood how fragile life can be
And now his hopes and desperation focused square on me
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Richard Lackman
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Wes Vogler 07 November 2015

It waqs a good read sir. Easy to follow with a nice rhythm. Thank you a 10 \i wish we could stop this jumping around of the screen. It is in too much of a hurry. Or is it just my computer?

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Really human feeling in its correct meaning and words the poets says here with experience he had with the patient who is eagerly waiting for the final result whether it is benign or negative the dreaded one. The final result is decided in the patients favor and saved the life in a narrow wish of the time. A physican have the opportunity to see such circumstances of woes of his patients and their eagerness and I have myself felt this complication regarding the disease of my sister in law and her eagerness to ascertain to save the life upto the last moment had a everlasting memory. The poet also says here the adverse consequences of the smoking habit which we can avoid at least for an escape.

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Hannah Kelly 05 May 2014

This is really inspirational - I really felt for the man and his wife!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 September 2012

Very striking and relevant theme for all of us who take life for granted -and the sudden realization that it can end today jolts us to the awareness (and regret) of how we wasted our lives on things that have no eternal value. Great poem worth printing for all to read.

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Josephine Collett 05 May 2012

One who had a fortunate reprieve. Love your poetry Richard - there is so much humanity in it and as a Christian, former cancer patient and nature lover, I find much to relate to and enjoy. Thank you for sharing your work and best wishes with your writing.

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Walterrean Salley 07 March 2012

Full of life, and rich in meaning, A very inspirational poem. 10

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Valerie Dohren 29 February 2012

Wonderful work Dick and a great message therein.

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