Friday, June 19, 2015

Almost Always Gone Comments

Rating: 3.9

i try to stay present
and remain
in this moment.
i try to keep
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Bela Amore
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Chinedu Dike 26 June 2015

Distress in the bliss of love well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Susan Lacovara 20 June 2015

There is a thin line between loving someone in the present....And still loving them once they are part of your past. I sometimes do not know which one is hardest to do. Well written and thought provoking piece.

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Allotey Abossey 20 June 2015

it happens sometimes....we just got to be certain in our spirit

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Kelly Kurt 19 June 2015

A terse, poignant poem of doubt Thanks for sharing

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