Thursday, June 13, 2013

Almost A Year Comments

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It's been almost a year
Since we turned here
I can remember the flames like yesterday
Purposely drowning in sound
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Heather Wilkins 10 July 2013

the flames of yesterday are hard to put out. the fire continues to burn. nice imagery

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Kelly Seale 14 June 2013

...I can see it linger and the edges Not as sharp as the used to be I can see toward the ends as they fray... Yes, as Hari said below, so deep and true... in part by part... i disect that year, and the memories never fade with time, only burn more vivid...deep within my mind. -Great Ink Autumn.; -) Kelly.

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Neela Nath Das 14 June 2013

The eraser still leaves marks And the memories will remain- - - - - - so deep and true are these lines!

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