Sunday, April 24, 2005

Almost A Princess Comments

Rating: 4.5

Almost a princess
Missed it by inches
Another dream, she’ll never find
She never forgets
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maggie signaigo
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This is excellent, sad, but not maudlin. Your words pour out in a stream-of-conscience but emotionally vivid stream. Well-done, L&T

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Lylyanna Pilewski 17 May 2005

Aww, I really loved that poem it was so sad. (but then again that's the stuff I love) I was very well writen flows nicely.

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