Wednesday, June 12, 2019

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I Almost cried today (no time)
It's been building up(gradually)
Exhaustion (overload)
Worry(health)
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Lyn Paul
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Khairul Ahsan 29 April 2020

A nice poem with a nice picture. 'That Little bit more', as if, would never come to fulfill our lives!

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2019

I alrwady have life! ! ! ! Living and Learning always. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’กโœ’๐Ÿ“š๐ŸŽ“ Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tony Karas 20 June 2019

Huge hugs. A well written poem. Sometimes life simply demands too much. Believe me you are not alone in this. We stand together you and I. Together we can face the world.

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Lyn Paul 20 June 2019

Thank you Tony, your support is uplifting. Sometimes we just need a little magic. This world is going too fast, giving to everyone yet not my self has taken its toll. Yet, it is all I know.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 June 2019

Life carries through stages Steps we cannot change No amount of worry Will change the happenings....outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Jane Campion 12 June 2019

A wonderful poem Lyn. I liked the format.

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