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A wonderful gift to a lovely daughter from her great mother. What else she would aspire for? Here I am to watch and guide your step each day I will never let anybody make you cry

Allow me to listen to your heart and say Here I am to watch and guide your step each day allow me to say something and spell out my feeling to u inreal melody...oh so gifted poem with words...i loved it...10

touchy and passionate poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , wish her..........bless her..from my side as well....every year

Every mother yearns to 'kiss and make it better'. Your birthday poem shares this truth and is chockablock with respect too - which the title demonstrates rather delightfully. A dignified and tender-hearted poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

' Allow me' the language and tone of the narrator are moving '. Interesting how mothers share similar sentiments about their children a lovely poem that deserves a 10. When you have time, read my: A Mother's Collection of: Tissues, Bones, and Blood'- Birthday tributes to my four children.

my dearest MM, happy birthday..i love ya..

such a sweet write, with so much maternal love...thankyou for sharing

So, sweet... a love flowing from a mom's heart... a very lovely tribute to a sweet daughter... Melanie Marie is so lucky to have you...a wonderful woman...a great poetess A loving friend.. 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

This again is a very sweet and lovely one indeed.. I mean so very lovely.. i honestly don't know what else to say.. always make me feel better when i read such beautiful ones, coming from the heart.. lovess shan

A special day. A special reason to show your love. Our children mean so much. Irene

A lovely tribute thru your love for your daughters birthday and with your words your proudness shines thru, some lovely lines Happy Birthday M++++++10 regards Thanks

Such a wonderful verses dedicated to your daughter...remarkable.. Happy Birthday Melanie....

Happy Birthday Melanie, nice birthday poem for her sweetie :) Andy 10

wow, such a sweet words, Happy Birthday to her... hope you you will always see happiness in her eyes....10 Hataw

Meggie, the name Allow Me carries a beautiful theme throughout this sensitive and heartfelt poem to Melanie. You are both so blessed to have each other. From 'and on your special day allow me to whisper to me and say we love you, God bless you, Happy Birthday' a magical birthday is created as the word 'whisper' evoked a love so pure and giving. Do tell Melanie a BIG HAPPY BIRTHDAY FROM ME! love Karin

wonderful complex(cognitive and visual) metaphor: ''When the skies of your life will be gloomy and cloudy'' excellent lyric poem.10++++ from Mari and 'Happy Birthday' sweet Melanie!

sweet lovely wishes from a great mother that always cares about her sweet daughter.. its amazing poems as you my dear sweet amazing poet.. happy hirthday to your sweet daughter.. hazem al..

Melanie From your Mom to you because she loves you so No words can ever let you know Just how much she cares for you Her love for you is really true So from all us poets with Mom we say A very special HAPPY BIRTHDAY I trust God will keep you safe in His hand Until He takes you to that great promise land Happy Birthday Melanie! ! ! ! ! !

This is a beautiful poem, Meggie, a wonderful example of a loving mother letting her daughter know she is deeply cared for and loved by you. It is a wonderful birthday present for Melanie. Carl.

Melanie Marie, Your mom has poured out her heart in this wish, If in life ever gloomy, just hug her and kiss. She will take away all your pain, In turn all happiness you will claim. Many happy returns of the day. CP