Saturday, February 7, 2009

Alliteration Experimentation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lying here utterly longing not to lose what has already been lost.
Ample ambiance to illuminate my awestruck artificial art.
Fighting false freedom to fend off folding faith.
Endless endorphins setting everyone up to fail inevitably.
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Benjamin Feliciano
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 July 2009

Yes, I yielded not to yawn I like this poem!

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